tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post4703514884735016176..comments2013-12-23T01:34:00.529-07:00Comments on 4 Books in 1 Year - A Writer's Challenge: Query letter for Son of Ogres - Version 2James Baronhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13275028465427530569noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post-64301841588093835592010-07-11T11:07:34.621-06:002010-07-11T11:07:34.621-06:00I saw an interesting way to slip in that you have ...I saw an interesting way to slip in that you have other MSs available... trying to remember--maybe J. Reid's blog? Will update when it comes to me. The query process is tough--don't let it get you down! best of luck~LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post-9287166438534157572010-07-10T18:46:11.553-06:002010-07-10T18:46:11.553-06:00Thank you, Lisa! :: bows ::Thank you, Lisa! :: bows ::James Baronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13275028465427530569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post-32004078702517611972010-07-09T22:54:52.260-06:002010-07-09T22:54:52.260-06:00Hi James! I'm just dropping by to let you kno...Hi James! I'm just dropping by to let you know I left a blog award for you on my most recent blog post -- http://bit.ly/9PvSjx! I hope the writing is going well. :-)Lisa K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00379245068324225101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post-32277045140081537502010-07-06T09:20:28.811-06:002010-07-06T09:20:28.811-06:00Thanks for your advice. I will take it.
I am soo...Thanks for your advice. I will take it.<br /><br />I am soooo excited about the process!<br /><br />-jamesJames Baronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13275028465427530569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post-30008862283638037132010-07-06T08:03:32.353-06:002010-07-06T08:03:32.353-06:00Hi LTM,
I will take your advice and drop the ment...Hi LTM,<br /><br />I will take your advice and drop the mention of the other three books. I should be focusing on the ONE that I am trying to sell.<br /><br />I am getting very excited about the process!<br /><br />-JamesJames Baronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13275028465427530569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4328951737207561177.post-34965846479846432712010-07-05T15:38:45.273-06:002010-07-05T15:38:45.273-06:00Hi, James! This is really coming together. What yo...Hi, James! This is really coming together. What you've got here gives me a good sense of what the book's about, and I guess other than adding some personalization for each agent you choose to query, I'd say give it a whirl! <br /><br />Jessica Sinsheimer had a good tip for starting the process here--see what you think: http://agencygatekeeper.blogspot.com/2010/03/middle-way-new-method-of-timing-your.html<br /><br />One note about your letter: I'd maybe end that last 'graph after "complete at 80K wds." Maybe add "It is availale for your review" somewhere, but leave off the last bit about the three other books--just because they say you should focus on ONE work you want to sell, and I guess they know you're needing their help to sell it, right?<br /><br />good luck!LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.com